Um, OK, first of all, use a reference for the characters so that you can draw them better. Pull up a picture of Bowser and try to draw him from the reference, because your drawing of Bowser was pretty bad; you used the oval tool and line tool to many times, and you just scribbled on the hair. You didn't draw Mario and Luigi to bad, plus, I found it funny that Luigi just fell out of the sky at random and didn't do anything in the fight. The voices were kind of cheap, and, well, the backgrounds were not too good. I give this a 3 overall.
Thank you. I think that was more generous than what a few others have given. X) Lol. But nonetheless, have you ever played Super Mario Bros. 3? I tried to make the background look like that. Also, I used the oval tool for a lot of it. Either way, I know what you mean though, my background for my first Flash was much better, I felt. It wasn't that good, but it was better nonetheless. I actually didn't scribble on the hair - if I remember correctly, I actually used multiple ovals and gave it a jagged-like line or something to that effect. I also intentionally made it so it looked like Mario's and Luigi's arms were away from each other because I wanted to give it a certain feel. I've seen a few animations with it before, but I forget what they were. XD Lol. I thought it'd fit. :) Even though I know my flash is so far away from being able to compare from the other flashes, it's in another universe, let alone comparing to the classics - I think (seeing as this was the most recent thing I saw that resembled it) it was the Maddness series-thing was what I was shooting for. :) I feel a bit nervous about this. XD Lol.
Edit: Oh, wait, I remember now. X) I only used multiple ovals to do the hair, but the line was straight.
I loved the first and the second episode! I love Sonic, they're so awesome! It reminds me a lot about Alvin-Earthworm's SMBZ series, though (I only watched episode 6). Oh, well, it's really cool!
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Rated 1.5 / 5 stars May 14, 2008
Oh, lord...
Um, OK, first of all, use a reference for the characters so that you can draw them better. Pull up a picture of Bowser and try to draw him from the reference, because your drawing of Bowser was pretty bad; you used the oval tool and line tool to many times, and you just scribbled on the hair. You didn't draw Mario and Luigi to bad, plus, I found it funny that Luigi just fell out of the sky at random and didn't do anything in the fight. The voices were kind of cheap, and, well, the backgrounds were not too good. I give this a 3 overall.
Thank you. I think that was more generous than what a few others have given. X) Lol. But nonetheless, have you ever played Super Mario Bros. 3? I tried to make the background look like that. Also, I used the oval tool for a lot of it. Either way, I know what you mean though, my background for my first Flash was much better, I felt. It wasn't that good, but it was better nonetheless. I actually didn't scribble on the hair - if I remember correctly, I actually used multiple ovals and gave it a jagged-like line or something to that effect. I also intentionally made it so it looked like Mario's and Luigi's arms were away from each other because I wanted to give it a certain feel. I've seen a few animations with it before, but I forget what they were. XD Lol. I thought it'd fit. :) Even though I know my flash is so far away from being able to compare from the other flashes, it's in another universe, let alone comparing to the classics - I think (seeing as this was the most recent thing I saw that resembled it) it was the Maddness series-thing was what I was shooting for. :) I feel a bit nervous about this. XD Lol.
Edit: Oh, wait, I remember now. X) I only used multiple ovals to do the hair, but the line was straight.
Rated 5 / 5 stars May 10, 2008
That was sooo cool!!!
I loved the first and the second episode! I love Sonic, they're so awesome! It reminds me a lot about Alvin-Earthworm's SMBZ series, though (I only watched episode 6). Oh, well, it's really cool!
Rated 5 / 5 stars May 10, 2008
LOL! XD
This was a very funny movie! But, I have to disagree with you, Sonic IS NOT cheap!!! Other then that, it was an AWESOME movie!